Screen Printing Design Process - T-shirt

I tried to fit the gun used in the thriller into my design because I felt the movie was based around the gun.

I attempted to integrate the title of the movie with the gun better but it just didn't look right.

I decided to make a vector of the gun used in the movie (Walther P99) to make it more accurate to the movie. The title still didn't quite fit.

I decided to fill more of the white space on the gun by having the title partly on the gun and partly filling the white space. I feel that this looked better.

Here is the predicted version of what the t-shirt should look like.